Blogging Site - Help Needed

CodrutTurcanu · 05-03-07, 01:20 AM

Hi there,

Want to find your opinion about my landing page...

Your feedback is greatly appreciated and welcomed.

Is this page enticing enough to make you sign-up?

FREE eCourse - 5 Deadly Blogging Mistakes

If YES/NO, why? What should I add/remove to
make it more compelling?

Thank you,
Codrut Turcanu

jaggiegill · 05-03-07, 07:54 PM

This splash page will not be enough to make me sign up. The main thing that you are missing on this page is some graphics or some images. Most successful splash pages have an image of the creator and signature on top of the information box.

I would also make the title bigger and a different color, blue on blue does not contrast so you want to pick a color that will stand out like mahogany . Your summary of your ebook doesn't seem to say why you will earn six figures if you join the course. Otherwise it looks good

weber · 05-24-07, 12:20 PM

I think the big figure of $29.95 might create confusion that what you are offering is not really free so visitors won't sign-up. Try to place it somewhere below. I have also read that it is more effective to use simple, literal words instead of complicated words that can mean so many things like the word "watering".