This is a great looking professional site but the only think I would change is the little box that wants it's viewer to fill out their e-mail. You should either put that to the side or delete it for good and stick that on the original page. Overall , great looking site!
Honestly, as a viewer it looks like another cookie cutter sales page that I exit before even reading the first few words. You need to hook the reads attention somehow real quick.
Ok this review is going to sound a little harsh but it's only to help...
First off that box is really off putting. It's annoying to be assaulted with ad's right away and it covers up your content. Next off your entire site looks like one big ad. It's so busy and has no real structure. The bright colors make things stick out and not in a good way. It reads way to gimmicky like those infomercials and that alone will drive off weary customers. It's a good start, you just need to refine a couple things.
Ok this review is going to sound a little harsh but it's only to help...
First off that box is really off putting. It's annoying to be assaulted with ad's right away and it covers up your content. Next off your entire site looks like one big ad. It's so busy and has no real structure. The bright colors make things stick out and not in a good way. It reads way to gimmicky like those infomercials and that alone will drive off weary customers. It's a good start, you just need to refine a couple things.
- 2 cents
I have the same thoughts on the site as this post. The colors in the website just don't mess and it has no structure.
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